Fallout Equestria THDC CHPT 4 P6

I feel that it is unfair to dismiss this as bad.  I feel that you are doing quite a few things well, such as proportions and expressions.  There is detail in the background that is nice.  However, it may seem distracting because it seems to blend in with the foreground.  I have the same problem whenever i draw in pencil.  One thing that I think would really be great is if you really pushed the shading.  I mean, make some of the shading really dark and add some pure white highlights where light hits.  Also, some cross-hatching would look awesome for shading.  Keep it up