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This is a poster print I made of Aero (or is it Aeros?) the mascot for brony Aerospace. I really liked it but theyre selling it on their website ( www.bronyaerospace.net ) in... well I dunno. But they let me put this on my DA if I watermarked it cause well... business be business lmao.
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:star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

Alright, where to start. I'm just going to point out certain things, the good, and what needs to be inproved.

Good:
I like the anatomy, it's well done as well as the carpet's design. There is a slightly obvious light source and that's good too. The Aero's expression is calm and inviting, I dig it. I can see you tried to put certain detail on the focus of the drawing, thats a nice idea. The shadows on the floor are a good detail that most people forget about, so good for you.
Improvements:
I think that the background could need more work, even though the detail is on Aero, there appears to be books that are not rectangular, and they don't differentiate from each other other than colour and size, you could have some books with maybe bands of different colours, and so fourth. I'm not seeing any texture other than the hair in this drawing. The globe has the same sheen as Aero's suit does, and fabric doesn't usually shine like that unless its some kind of shiny material or vinyl. You're going to hate me for this, but her hair is something I find could be 'neater'. The lines in it are shakier and kinda 'globby' in some spots, and the shading isn't evident. Overall the hair doesn't look good. I am well aware that it IS in fact your style, but you can keep true to it and improve it. I can see where Andrew is coming from on this. The eyelashes are also a little freakish to me, they look not so light or graceful like the ponies in the show, but more like Yzma from the emperor's new groove, no offense. The one nostril also seems a tad awkward. Something else seems off about the globe to me, and I think it may be the whole 2dish-ness of it. Also, it seems the only thing in the drawing here of your own original style is in fact the mane and tail. The tail shouldn't even start that small, should be wider, not to mention. If you were going for a FULL FiM style, I would've made the background, like the bookshelf more textured like in the show. Also, I've never seen a globe of the moon, it isn't very intriguing to me. The easy solution to make the globe more interesting would be to use a star globe, and that's all I got in the way of critiques. Don't be offended by anything please, it's just to help optimize the sales of this particular print. Overall, it does have a pleasant appearance.